Poetry in Paradise is a not for profit group and consists of poets and supporters across many age groups. Some Bush Poetry is recited but mostly we write poems with a metre, or at least we attempt to. Occasionally there is a swear word or two but free style rappers that swear in line after line of lyric would lose their audience and the shock the value is wasted. There are a lot of ladies present and vulgarity is just not needed or respected. Look at the content of the poems in this blog and you will see what I mean. Other poems can been seen on
http://joansmallpoetryand books.com/poetry_in_paradise.html .
We meet third Sunday of every month and we have been doing so for ten years as of March 2014, approaching 12 years rapidly.
Bring your poems and your friends and enjoy the coffee and cake available in the foyer cafe for poetry in paradise discounted price while you sit in the air conditioning and listen to our poetry.
Optional monthly themes and optional monthly first lines are available to inspire your creative bug to get chomping.
This month is "Music" " and the first line is
"I piled all the dishes in the sink …………."
See you on the 19th and hope its a nice sunny Qld day.
Come along and meet Jeff Irene Joan Judi Bob Banjo Alex Tom Paul M Vincent Gloria Trish & David Jean David Mac & Joyce, Marta &; David, Manya John Alan Roger ; Pammy Margaret & Ray Graham Paul K John Ted Marina Bram Geoff Colleen Tracey and a few more other friendly people.
Thursday, November 27, 2014
Farm Life
Farm life 10/03/14
Get off the
tractor stay away from the dam
Don’t touch the
rifle let go of that lamb
Don’t scare your Nana
no running inside
You’re from your
father n not from my side
Hop off that
ladder what the hell did you say
Drop all those
bullets and don’t wet the hay
Get down from the fence
n away from the knife
Stay out of my way and you’ll live a long life
Don’t hurt your
brother what a bad thing to do
Get out of my shed
and did you water my shoe
Out of that water
tank and down from the tree
The dam is for
swimming its not where you pee
Get off the
clothesline you’re ruining my head
You’re making my
face into permanent red
Put out that fire
what are you gonna do next
Let go of that
chicken stop wringing its neck
You little mongrel
you’re just no good at all
Me buttons are all
pushed to right up the wall
Old Blue is
cowering he’s guarding his knackers
His tail is all
singed from you lightin those crackers
Those words that
you painted all over my shed
Horrible and evil
I cant believe what you said
The cattle are
restless so may slugs in their side
You broke off the
barrel and about it you’ve lied
Dad’s medals are
missing its blank on the wall
The ol’303 gone
somewhere cant find it at all
The lolly tins
empty and the beer fridge is too
I’m at the end of
me tether its all frayed by you
Go back to the
city you’re not welcome back here
We’re goin on
holiday for the whole flaming year
Copyright 1028534
November Poem "Lightning Strikes" dedicated to the members of the Rural Fire Brigade across Australia.
Lightning strikes
The waking dog
will run and bark
The gum tree
explodes with a spark
Children cry
scared in the dark
Mother makes a
calming remark
Animals run they
are in strife
The firestorm
wants another life
A Husband strong
embraces his wife
The crack thunders
out like a knife
The birds knew
they’ve gone afar
The tree has fallen
upon their car
Last years back
burn left a scar
It’s here now it’s
where they are
Phone lines are
down no one to call
Mobile signal lost
there’s not one at all
Wet blankets line
the fresh soaked wall
Parents are scared
and children bawl
Smoke has come and
filled the room
Heavier now than
the sense of doom
The shed cracks on
fire with a boom
Mother nature has
sent her deadly broom
The mother cries
at what might not be
The father’s mind
aches a Man is he?
The dogs are in
the huddle when they could free
Kay sera sera what will be will be
They hear the
shatter of window glass
The fire is
attending well to its task
The generator
stalls it’s breathed its last
They feel like the inside of a coffee flask
Then from outside
the broken windowsill
A voice calls out
“are you in there Bill”
With a panic of
excitement they give a shrill
They answer back
the loudest they ever will
Many lives were
risked in efforts to save
Danger was faced into
fire walked the brave
The men and the
women in the passing parade
True Aussie heroes
of the rural fire brigade
So next time their
bucket is passed around
Think of that
family in that country town
They never gave up
when the chips were down
Empty your pockets
so the next ones too can be found
18/10/14 1028534
Poetry in Paradise
November Poetry Report 2014
Poetry report 16/11/2014
The day started off with the sun high in the sky and running on full
voltage!! We had twenty-eight people
join us on the day and several were new poets and also a couple of poets that
had not been for a little while. We had an apology in person from David for
Trish not being ably to join us due to feeling a little unwell, we hope she
feels better soon and is able to join us for the December recital, thank you
very much David. A local ‘celebrity’ the renowned bush poet and hinterland
legend dairy farming primary producer and marketeer Geoff Sharp turned up out
of the blue and entertained us all with a couple of his classic recitals of
some Jake Drake Aussie Bush poems, his guest on the day was a lady from the
‘bush’ Colleen and she was equally talented with reciting bush poetry and held
the audience in her hand at the microphone as well as Geoff did. Tracy came
along for the first time and she really enjoyed the afternoon and said she will
be back again to listen to the poetry. We also had two young German exchange
students and one student from Brazil; they stayed for the whole afternoon and
stated they will come again when able.
The short month snuck up on a few people and they couldn’t make due
to prior commitments. I saw Kathy downtown on Thursday and then the next day I
saw Roger and Pammy walking down the street!!
Several poets joined us at the Anglers Arms Hotel after the recital for
a social soft drink and a lovely dinner, a nice afternoon, good food and good
conversation was enjoyed and shared with good people. Thank you Judi Joan
Liseby Graham David Marina Bram and Marta & David.
The poetry was exceptionally good this month and just keeps on
getting better with such great diversity inspired by the monthly lines and
themes. So many different interpretations make for a really interesting and
most enjoyable afternoon.
Bob was in fine form and looked a little taller on top of his soapbox
as he shared his dismay at the governments of the world trying to turn us into
little tax making robots of the system, he was fired up and letting’em have it
with both barrels. His words were written six years ago adding to his dismay as
the ‘bastards aint improved one bit’ since then. His second poem was a very wet
tale of true loves first kiss; his detail was very specific as he unfolded the
event at the drive-inn theatre when he was a young greasy haired Bodgie on his
fist date!! His adventure was very funny and he was left alone and shattered in
his sin-bin shaggin wagon!! Bob kept with our closing time tradition, as we
went over time he recited another tale about little ‘Jimmy’ at school with
pretty young teachers counting crows and licking ice blocks.
Joan recited a
poem she wrote on the day about robots that contained a bit of a warning about
human laziness and the possible implementation of terminator like servants
rising against us, so do your chores and enjoy the mundaneness of daily house
work because the alternative is scary!! Her second poem was about a childhood
dog she nicknamed “Bob the Dog” because her older brother had given the dog six
Christian names and all of them were famous explorers, when he should have
called him Houdini for reasons that came apparent as Bob grew up over under and
out!!
Eoin recited his great piece titled “War is a Whore”, covering the
atrocities of ISIS and other extremists around the world today and in the past,
the century old conflicts that still rage on as we speak while poverty is
killing millions every year and people die daily from no food water clothing
and heat; and it is happening right now here on our doorstep and in our
neighbourhoods with the rising cost of essential services driving some people
to despair. His second poem was sung to the tune of “Advance Australia Fair”
and bagged the likes of king Clive and the other crooked lying two-faced
politicians that dwell in the troughs of our nations capital.
Alex bought an elm easel from the big hardware store and it reminded him
of his childhood days and how his Dad worked with wood of all kinds on the farm
and that led to a recollection of “The Woodcutters song” from the 1970’s which
he then recited the lyrics to us with resounding applause. His second poem was
connected to his thoughts on a similar line and was written by Australian poet
Les Murray titled “Singing” a great poem about walking across a freshly
ploughed field.
Judi shared her recently published poem titled “In my own Garden”, a very
nice poem about the garden inside her heart that she tends to daily with loving
care and attention. The poem was published in an international journal of poems
titled “Heavenly Hymns” congratulations Judi. Judi’s second poem was a poem she
wrote in 2009 on the Christmas theme, nicely written and full of festive spirit
and a nice dedication to us all at Poetry in Paradise.
Graham recited his poem “The Boer War” and told how his mates served in
other wars and they used to meet at the RSL and talk about the old days, a
great poem and well recited. His second pome was titled “The Greatest Whinger
on Earth”, how would ya be, how would ya bloody well be! a very funny poem and
true of so many people that don’t realize how lucky they are to have what they
have in their lives.
Jean recited two poems from her diary kept during her experience of
living with the native people in New Guinea and she brought along sheaths and
other traditional Dani customary wears, very educational; and very interesting
tales. Jean has also published a book on her adventure and their way of life.
John joined us again and shared his poem that is a tribute to his friend
Rebecca, a nicely written poem that followed the metre of “Shall I compare thee
to a summers day”. His second poem was about love and how it is magnetic for it
repels and attracts and is truly a gift given from up above, a nice poem and
well received.
Ted recited on the pet theme and told us about his chicken ‘Henny Penny’
his Hawke called Bob, Monty the python, Genghis the Burmese cat, Bunyip the
French Bulldog and some Galah that didn’t like being caged, very funny and well
presented. His second poem was “When the Chips are Down”, he questioned would
you stand up and be counted when you’re needed would you be true blue, do you
help out when the need arises; great poem and well written.
The Banjo recited a very well written poem he wrote himself about Man’s and
his best friend ‘Mozzie the Cattle Dog’, he took us on a very emotional journey
as we all recalled our own four legged mate that we loved and lost and we all
shared his pain; great poem Banjo!! His second poem was a crowd favorite
written by Henry Lawson; “Bill” Banjo did a great recital and received
thunderous applause.
Marina recited her poem about one of her main passions in life titled “My
Karaoke Friends”, she spoke of Alf
(Elvis) Judy (Bubbles) Lynette (Velvet) Johnny (High Notes) Melodic Didi, booming
Dennis, Georgie Porgy & Jane and her favorite singer of them all, Bram. Her
second poem was the spoken version of a song she had published that should be
on every Christmas list titled “Kookaburra Christmas”, one of the best Aussie
tunes I’ve heard, Marina sang the chorus and we would all love to hear the CD.
Bram recited a poem titled “Doggy Heaven” and he narrated their favorite
pet’s journey into the land of smelly bones free shoes, pillows galore and
socks to chew everywhere and then to top it off its right next door to ‘pussy
heaven’ when the need to chase a cat or two comes over the canine residents.
His second poem was very funny and was written to the metre of “Yesterday” as
he pondered losing his license at a RBT stop and was feeling a bit despaired,
like the policeman’s toe that he just ran over.
David wrote on the Robot’s theme and recited his poem titled “Stobor”
nettirw llew and well received by all, a funny tale of his mechanical servant
needing and overhaul and getting Clark Kent’s chip by mistake. His second poem
was also on the pet theme and he opened his heart and shared his powerful poem written
on the loss of his much loved ‘Amy’ his words also brought tears to our eyes
once again.
Manya brought her brother John along from their family reunion for their
Mums 99th Birthday, she shared her poem titled “Stardust” Inspired
by Prof Brian Cox informing the world we originate from the stars, a great poem
exploring the horror and the beauty of life in this modern world. Her second
poem was written 25 years ago about love lost, blue eyes, poor attention spans
and unappreciated words recited to some one that should have just let go!! Manya’s
Mother has had a book published Titled “WE SURVIVED; A Mothers Story of
Japanese Captivity”, by Nell van de Graaff. (This story of courage is told
simply, humbly and gently. It contains no trace of bitterness, only the calm
wisdom of a survivor).
John, Manya’s brother is also talented in the poetry field and did two
great recitals, his first poem was titled “The Black Leathered Gladiator” it was
a very moving poem about life and a Mother witnessing the frailty of life on a
motorcycle as she saw it crash on a corner from her office window. His second
poem was a free verse description of him witnessing a beautiful lady sitting
down at a bus stop, he then reduced it to Tanka verse and wrote five lines on
the same experience, then he cleverly reduced the image in our minds to three
lines with Haiku verse and we could still appreciate the beauty of the
moment.
Alan recited his poem inspired by “Bill” written by Henry Lawson about the
civil rights movements inspired by the likes of women such as Rosa Parkes and Malala Yousafzai; two women
that have risked their lives for their beliefs and stood fast against what
seemed like insurmountable adversity and got their message heard all the way
around the world and proved that one person can truly make a difference!!! His
second poem was his recitation of a Monty Python song performed live at the
Hollywood bowl called the Philosophers Drinking Song, Immaneul Kent was a real
pissant he was very rarely stable,
Heidegger Heideggar was a boozy beggar
he could drink you under the table, David Hume could out consume Willhelm
Friedrich Hegel, Wittgenstein was a beery swine who was just as sloshed as
Schlegel ………….. a lovely little thinker but a bugger when he’s pissed. Boom
Boom
Joyce entertained us with her comedic tale of her, ‘in vogue at the time’
of the eighties, pet and how she had lovingly adopted a cute little rock!!! Her
second poem was on the robot theme and she warned us that all this modern
technology is turning us into robots with all the artificial organs and limbs
inside us humans today, beware!!
Mac wrote on the pet theme and the other combined into the one poem as
he told of his dream of having a robot puppy, it can fetch but you don’t have
to worry about the pee on the carpet!! His second poem was written by Kath
Davis in 1975 and was titled “Top Dressing” and told of a beautiful lady
teacher from the ‘city’ that moved to the ‘bush’ and had all the country lads
in hot pursuit, she married and stayed there then had to explain the beauty of
the bush to her ‘city’ parents.
Tom is always chasing rainbows and today was no different as he told of
Mick and Paddy doing the same at the bar of the Ruptured Duck in the Valley of
Sugar!! The lucky buggers found their pot of gold and killed Squire Trilones
prize stallion in the process, but luckily Paddy being a fast talker they got
out of trouble and got to keep the booty!! In his second poem he told about
Haiku being seventeen syllables and how
“to convey ones mood in seventeen syllables is very diffic….” His third
tale was read straight from the ledger being kept on him by “the man upstairs”
as he told of a journey of drunken debauchery with him and Harry the lone brain
cell annoying a taxi driver assaulting a gnome then upsetting his wife by
mistaking a wardrobe for the water closet and they blamed the ‘Nectar of the
Gods’ as they dashed off to another round of darts at the local.
Geoff Sharp recited Jake Drakes “The Cattle Dogs Revenge” and told of the day
the uninvited city folks third cousins sisters uncles brothers Rottweiler
killed Mums chooks and destroyed the serenity at the farm but was then neutered
by ‘Woody’ the cattle dog as the dim witted owner searched frantically through
his dog psychiatry book and puppy school journal for a solution. His second equally
entertaining recital was “The Widow on the Flat” one of my favorites and one
I’m trying to commit to memory.
Colleen from Springsure, out by Emerald, came last round the post as she
did a great job reciting from memory her poem about the Diamantina River and
told of Mankinds useless attempts to change its course and how it is the heart
beat of the bush and always will be and should be respected and left alone. Her
second poem was one that was accepted by and published by an invitation from
former Premier Peter Beattie to all poets to send in a poem about their vision
of Queensland; it was titled “Freedom” and she spoke of her dream of a freedom
from fear, from hunger greed and poverty for all Queenslanders; for people to
want less and to be happy with what they have and not crave for what the corporates
tell them they need; two really great metre perfect poems.
Thank you everyone for your poetry and participation in our group,
this is our tenth year and I just paid the renewal fee for “Poetry in Paradise”
as a registered trade mark to ensure another ten years of our social get
together while sharing our hearts words and lives.
See you on the 21st of December if you can make it with
all the festivities of the Christmas goings on. Bye for now and thank your
Mother for the Rabbits. Jeffery Irene,
Joan and all of the poets in paradise.
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