Monday, November 2, 2015

As lie at rest the rewrite 19.04.2015


As I lie at rest on a patch of clover
I am thinking all that Banjo has done
I wonder of the world he knew back then
No polluted view of the setting sun
I pondered his thoughts, as he was dying
His son eagerly his name supplying?
For one more drink was he right then crying?
Or did he know then that his last had come


Did his ol’ mates fill his thoughts ones like Lawson
Did he ponder seeing Harry Morant
Would Brady, Gilmore or Dorathea
Place on his coffin the bud of a plant
Did he dream of the bush and of Clancy
Was swapping places, his final fancy
About dying was he feeling ansi
Was Waltzing Matilda a distant chant

Who would he see waiting up there to meet him
Saltbush Bill be standing there at the gate
Is The Man from Ironbark still bleeding
Would Magninnis want to question his fate
Will the black swans fly out from the sunrise
Would the lucerne flats offer him their prize 
The old man offer, regret in reprise
From the Cooper did Clancy make the date


To camp by the billabong outside heaven
It is a future he has long well earned
He’ll be spending his days with the swagman
A splendid reward for all he has learned
Reliving good old Australian ways 
All the warm nights and nice long sunny days
At Dead Mans creek he could sit back and laze
With the cashbook and the journal well burned



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I wandered lonely as a cloud. August 2015

I wandered lonely as a cloud across a clear blue sky
I heard the fear of failure barking while I drifted into why
There I was so close to heaven with not a chance of rain
So close to true happiness yet still I clung onto pain

Others could be that cloud and bathe across the blue
Many like me will wonder if a storm soon would brew
Comfort comes in knowing that you will get it wrong
Often I am out there singing but the lyrics are little gone

That cloud could be so big or maybe it is really small
Your imagination has the power for you to change it all
We shape our future by the thoughts inside our mind
There always is the choice to be cold or to be kind

I wandered lonely as a cloud across a clear blue sky
Then I suddenly realized how good it was to fly
There I was up there, the whole world was in my view
Suddenly I was no longer lonely for there so much that I could do



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Children are the future. September 2015


I got to have some time off work
to have a well earned rest
Sadly Irene couldn’t join me
and it’s with her I’m at my best

Irene got a brand new job
That she applied for late last year
it was too late to cancel holidays
so I decided to disappear

Eight hours on my motorbike
Headed south on the interstate
Visited my grandsons and my daughter
Ten days and it was great

Building on my relationship
One founded deep in love
Passing on a little wisdom
Trying not to use kid gloves

Trying to help my daughter
Let her know she is not all alone
That inside my heart and house
She always will have a home

I may not be a real great father
I’ve always tried to do my best
I help them all out when ever I can
I think I’ve passed the being there test

I think my children love me
And they know my bank is dry
I’m not very good at saving
And I’m not afraid to cry

I try to teach family values
Like never hold onto a grudge
I’ve forgiven others often
Though there silence does not budge

Life is way too short for hatred
That is such a final word
Maintaining silence for thirty years
I really find quite absurd

I want my Grand children to love me
And my children to be my friend
I hope we can always sort it out
Never let our bond come to an end

I’ll visit another daughter tomorrow
I’m flying northward in a plane
I’m staying with her at their house
She is my baby and still wears my name

It will be good to see her again
I saw my only son just yesterday
All my children are close to me

Ill do what I can to make them stay

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Poetry report poem October 2015

Poetry report poem October 2015

The monthly theme was rough, some people thought it tough
Others thought it was just too hard to try
I wrote a poem for Manya’s Mum, it sounded a little glum
both Manya and myself shared a little cry

Bob was ready for a good time, as he wrote about the shine
He was really cursing looking for some word
He had a little wine, whined about finding rhyme
Then complained that life is just too absurd

He wrote about his dying mate, who was about to meet his fate
As he was crawling slowly down the stairs
His wife had sealed his doom twas lookin pretty gloom
He soon found out much she really cares

There was an elderly couple at the table looking pretty able
As they shared one lonely dinner on a plate
It was not a dementia adventure as they only had one denture
And she thought his after bite was great

Joan was talking about a shine one of a truly different kind
Ross was there to guide her in the bush
They went out to Rubyvale and probably shared and ale
Joan could live there and doesn’t need a push

Joan spoke of a preacher whose truthfulness did reach her
While she sat and listened inside his church
He used his journey as an example his troubles had been ample
Never once did his faith leave him in the lurch

Graham really did deliver with the Man from Snowy River
He spoke it like it was he riding in between
He took us to that mountain place with a smile upon his face
Then he went and tried to cut it green


Jean is one who never fails and she travelled from New South Wales
To let us know what a great party you all missed
Her friends numbered eighty and the birthday cake was weighty
Jasmine and Steve making sure that she was kissed

The police caught a burglar Jean helped him down the gurgler
She felt sneaky just like an undercover spy
Jean helped to plant the seed that sent him on his crooked deed
And it started from her simple great big lie 

Young Harry Dales life was over in the Ballad of the Drover
Banjo called with a tear inside his voice
Rover and the young lad sank not too far from the muddy bank
While someone loved him and regrets his choice

Great poems you can recycle just like Mulga Bill and his Bi cycle
The story goin round near Dead Mans Creek
With a dash too much of pride braggin theres nuthin he couldn’t ride
He was left red faced from creek to cheek

Bob had four poems in his recital and I could list every title
Like ecstasy he shared inside another’s soul
An ode a verse and a perfect sonnet Bob was really on it
He knows his poetry with words he can control

Sue said do not worry for sometimes it’s too late to say sorry
You have to have faith within yourself
Sue knows what feels right like holding your babies every night
Love is the best thing for your health

Manya spoke of the love for her mother and for one other
Opening her heart with a tear filled eye
Then she really got jacked when her system it got hacked
She was left really wondering “oh why”?

Judi was quite rational, for her poetry has gone international
Quoting her words from heavenly hymns
She wrote about life and how not to get caught up in any strife
To love and not take flight on fancy whims

John only had the one poem having written it on his own
Waking from a coma just like a dream
All the Aussie animals he could see and he wanted to be free
With eyes closed the bush could be seen

Joyce’s poem was full of grandeur written by a true FN Qldr
The infamous cheeky ol’skinner Mr Mac
Joyce recited his poem for his knees had him laid up at home
He was bludging and reckons he’ll soon be back

Joyce said she doesn’t shine but she did once in her prime
It was playing the game that they call tennis
Then when she got older she got balls and a little bolder
With a golf club she became a flamin menace

She asked Mac do not forget me with your arms please protect me
Never back down nor act out like a whuus
Always be there to love and to place no other up above
Hold me close just like you’re an octopus

Tracey wrote on the beauty of the sorrow in the promise of tomorrow
Inspired by a friend who looked so sad
He had lost his wife and his heart was now down and in strife
She reminded him of the love that they had

Ted had a cheeky look as he self promoted his new book
Then he pondered on the lies we tell the youth
The little boy was crying to find Granddad he was trying
He was dead and they wouldn’t tell the truth

If your troubles are ninety plus nine, well you can still shine
If you shoulder in with all your might
When you’re scared and in the dark your fears you must park
Remember God is always on the side of right

Alan told the tale of human dramas with no mention of any lamas
How little things can take you back where you were born
A flat in a country town the sign in an old post office closing down
Hemingways “Baby shoes size two never worn”.

Kathy came back to the group havin a break from her travelling loop
She recited “Watt Luck” another poem by Mac
It contained no gloom as it was inspired by a doctor’s room
We were all pleased to have our Kathy back

Her second poem she did deliver kind words about her lovely river
A peaceful spot that at times is just so still
Smooth stones and wattle flowers she has idled there many hours
Her grandson loves it there and always will

Lyn liked the shine of the moon above the warmth inside love
The glow she used to get upon her shoes
The shinny diamond on her finger the memories do linger
Then in love sometimes you still can lose

Hold me close was the theme and she is living in a dream
The days ahead are filled with sunny weather
For she never thought she’d find a man so loving and so kind
Two wonderful years now they have been together

Roger was last to recite and he told us of his forty hour flight
never again does he wants to see ol Cornwall
Though she looks good in her PJ’s he misses pammy and her ways
He was so glad to be back here with us all

Roger stood up proud and bold as he told of men that dig for gold
And the terrible fate that fell Tom McKay
He saw the Min Min light across the desert on a lonely night

While the dingo’s howled where his body lay. 

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